tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6331439284778559265.post6121024025396060005..comments2013-03-20T14:07:25.250-07:00Comments on Short Stories: VirusEhtisham Hussainhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01979290718241966259noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6331439284778559265.post-9421082314132445722012-08-29T05:19:41.130-07:002012-08-29T05:19:41.130-07:00I feel you try to be very short while writing shor...I feel you try to be very short while writing short stories. I've read short stories of more than 10 pages and they are by renowned short story writers like Checkov. The ending comes very abrupt, needs to add some more details in the end. Add some drama!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11134720563218755737noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6331439284778559265.post-5622886308248904402012-08-09T02:08:30.240-07:002012-08-09T02:08:30.240-07:00Sorry for the late reply, the virus killed him. I ...Sorry for the late reply, the virus killed him. I am working on a follow up story that will explain the events in this story and hopefully build the basis for a short series of stories. :)Ehtisham Hussainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01979290718241966259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6331439284778559265.post-60728860713850727542012-08-09T02:07:48.242-07:002012-08-09T02:07:48.242-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Ehtisham Hussainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01979290718241966259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6331439284778559265.post-88734301126830912262012-08-03T05:44:59.813-07:002012-08-03T05:44:59.813-07:00What killed Dr. Smith?What killed Dr. Smith?Karimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02739398018253449367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6331439284778559265.post-10257910275094802092012-07-27T04:36:39.034-07:002012-07-27T04:36:39.034-07:00starting was great and exciting. In the middle par...starting was great and exciting. In the middle part, I got squeezed what will happen next but ending was very sudden. I thought lady will turn into virus. A good piece of writing.A soulful girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15695921705872894463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6331439284778559265.post-36662348723304285292012-07-26T20:59:06.127-07:002012-07-26T20:59:06.127-07:00I am not entirely against adding to the end or rev...I am not entirely against adding to the end or revising it, if more people say that it ended abruptly then I will change it :). Great to hear from you after such a long time :).Ehtisham Hussainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01979290718241966259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6331439284778559265.post-46529789226251316302012-07-26T12:52:31.017-07:002012-07-26T12:52:31.017-07:00one of those stories where u wished it did not end...one of those stories where u wished it did not ended so abruptly....Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10069997703890184426noreply@blogger.com